2018. december 20., csütörtök

The present that changed everything.

Toby was home alone. He had been playing video games all day, when his mother arrived. He was angry because his mother interrupted him, but when he saw a box that he get, he became excited. He followed his curiousness, so he stopped playing. He opened the box slowly, and saw a photo album. When he opened it, and glanced on the first picture. There were his all family gathered together. He started checking the rest of the photos. It was about his parents, when they had been very young. They were really happy, while doing several interesting things. He didn't see any computers and controllers, but books, board games, playgrounds, friends and real happiness instead. He had been thought that living without computer games is dull, but he couldn't see any boredom on the pictures. Suddenly the photo album ran out of the interesting pictures, and on the following picture he saw himself sitting on the sofa and playing video games all day. Then came lot of empty space in the book. He knew, these were for his memories.
Toby was thinking about his life. He realized that if he continues his life like this, he won't have memories like these that he can show to his children. He talked to his mother about his life. He was angry at himself because he wasted his life in front of a computer.
He decided to get out of the room, and have precious moments in the real life. In the following months he managed to acquire memories so he could full the book with his own memories.

3 megjegyzés:

  1. Thank you, I am so happy now <3

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  2. Thank you, Fanni. I love it. Very original. some grammar: 1.He had been thought...no. it is passive. He had always thought (mindig is azt hitte). He had been thinking since he was a child...grammatically not correct (think has no ING in gondol, vél meaning) 2. full is an adjective. fill is a verb.

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