Benny was home alone. He had been playing PS since early morning. He was really excited about the game. When his mother came home, she brought a box. Until she went upstairs, Benny looked at the box and he felt excited. He didn't know what was in the box. His mother went down and she said that it would be his Christmas present. Benny hope that he got a new video game. On the next day everything would reveal. Benny got up early and he was excited. He waited his mother and he opened the present. There was a puppy in the box. He was suprised when he saw the puppy in the box. He felt happy but a little he was
(Eszti and Martin were not able to finish their story due to technical problems)
Eszti, Martin, you are a great couple. I like the story, thanks. I missed only one past form: Benny hopeD.
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